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Traumatized by the lambency.

Buried underneath the

Flesh

Of self loathe.




                                                               His
Salt coloured skin,
                            
                              Ripened lips,
                                              
                                                    and slender fingers.
                                                                
                                                                
                                                                Our


                                                                                    Orange moon
                                                                                                         
                                                                                                          And apple stars.


                                                         -In the taste of
                                                                
                                                                 fallacy.






Security, Fidelity, Fuck.





Agonising.
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In a still state, not aware.. nor awake.

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:iconnosferatu-87kard:
Don't get me wrong, it's good.
And the format is still amazing, adds drama to it, ehhee'.
But it took me a while to get it.
XD

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Sorry.. this poem was quite, well.. it was like I had a blister, and the popping resulted in this piece. Thank you.

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Blame the cruel Art of Pretension .

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:iconhellfaust84:
The formatting does add a tremendous depth to the overall piece... I like it.

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Thank you Hell faust :heart:
I am sorry for the late reply.. Yes, I was trying something new.


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:iconhellfaust84:
You are welcome. I think it worked

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i hope it did, aswell.

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:iconkristow:
This is amazing! I absolutely love the phrases "Orange moon and apple stars" and "salt coloured skin". It's a beautiful concept and layout. :) :heart:

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:iconvampiricbunny:
Thank you so much for your comment.. The "orange moon" is off an asian theory.. like there is love, when the sun and the moon collide.

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:iconkristow:
That is so beautiful... Is it like a legend? :)

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